ilovethecats
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Wanted to reach out to the intelligent people of egriz with super-high ID's and get their opinions.
I'm working on a piece about MSU fullback RJ Fitzgerald. I'm a lousy writer but wanted to give it a whirl. Ironically, an actual writer just so happened to want to do a piece on him as well so I feel like I'm walking a slippery slope here. But I have learned a lot about what is ok and what is not ok so hopefully you enjoy this little blip from the story I'm working on:
A doctor told RJ Fitzgerald that he would miss the rest of this season. Fitzgerald wasn’t convinced.
The Montana State football team’s starting fullback dislocated his left elbow in MSU’s Gold Rush game. It certainly looked like a season ender, but a trainer told Fitzgerald he could return in four to six weeks.
Fitzgerald was activated last week, five games after the injury, and he played in MSU’s 13-7 win at Weber State.
*NOT PLAGIARISM*
A doctor told RJ Fitzgerald that he would miss the rest of this season. Fitzgerald wasn’t convinced.
The Montana State football team’s starting fullback dislocated his left elbow in MSU’s Gold Rush game. It certainly looked like a season ender, but a trainer told Fitzgerald he could return in four to six weeks.
Fitzgerald was activated last week, five games after the injury, and he played in MSU’s 13-7 win at Weber State.
THESE ARE MY OWN THOUGHTS!!!!!!
*PLAGIARISM*
If someone with a super huge ID could give me some feedback I'd love it. I don't want to be known as a slimy, lying plagiarist so if you could just walk me in the right direction I think it would go as long way homing my writing craft.
I'm working on a piece about MSU fullback RJ Fitzgerald. I'm a lousy writer but wanted to give it a whirl. Ironically, an actual writer just so happened to want to do a piece on him as well so I feel like I'm walking a slippery slope here. But I have learned a lot about what is ok and what is not ok so hopefully you enjoy this little blip from the story I'm working on:
A doctor told RJ Fitzgerald that he would miss the rest of this season. Fitzgerald wasn’t convinced.
The Montana State football team’s starting fullback dislocated his left elbow in MSU’s Gold Rush game. It certainly looked like a season ender, but a trainer told Fitzgerald he could return in four to six weeks.
Fitzgerald was activated last week, five games after the injury, and he played in MSU’s 13-7 win at Weber State.
*NOT PLAGIARISM*
A doctor told RJ Fitzgerald that he would miss the rest of this season. Fitzgerald wasn’t convinced.
The Montana State football team’s starting fullback dislocated his left elbow in MSU’s Gold Rush game. It certainly looked like a season ender, but a trainer told Fitzgerald he could return in four to six weeks.
Fitzgerald was activated last week, five games after the injury, and he played in MSU’s 13-7 win at Weber State.
THESE ARE MY OWN THOUGHTS!!!!!!
*PLAGIARISM*
If someone with a super huge ID could give me some feedback I'd love it. I don't want to be known as a slimy, lying plagiarist so if you could just walk me in the right direction I think it would go as long way homing my writing craft.